Question

【題目】 書面表達

澳大利亞的餐桌禮儀與中國的餐桌禮儀是大不相同的。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一篇題為“Australian Table Manners”的短文。

1. 每個人的早餐時間不同。13歲以上的人自己準(zhǔn)備。如果是最后一個吃早餐的，吃完后要把面包、牛奶等放回冰箱。

2. 午餐通常在12：30與14：00之間�？梢詼�(zhǔn)備午餐包帶到學(xué)校或工廠吃。

3.晚飯在18：00與19：30之間。晚餐有主菜與甜點。澳大利亞人喜歡邊吃飯邊喝啤酒。

4. 吃飯前要幫助擺放餐具(tableware)，飯后要幫忙收拾餐桌。

要求：

1. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以保證內(nèi)容的完整、豐富與流暢。

2. 詞數(shù)不少于80。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Australian Table Manners

Australia is a beautiful country with the sea around it. There are some table manners about it.

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If you go there one day, you need to know these and they can help you a lot.

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If you go there one day, you need to know these and they can help you a lot.

Answer 1

【答案】Australian Table Manners

Australia is a beautiful country with the sea around it. There are some table manners about it.

Everyone has breakfast at different times every morning. And the people over the age of thirteen must prepare the breakfast for themselves. If you are the last to have breakfast, you need to put the bread, milk and so on back in the fridge.

The lunch is usually between half past twelve and fourteen. You can take your lunch bag to your school or factory to have your own lunch.

The dinner is often between eighteen and half past nineteen. The dinner is usually about main dishes and desserts. Australians like drinking beer while having dinner.

Importantly, you must help to lay out the tableware before dinner and clean the table.

【解析】

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這篇作文需要對澳大利亞的餐桌禮儀進行介紹，需要介紹的要點已經(jīng)給了出來，具體來看，有關(guān)于一日三餐的時間問題以及相關(guān)補充的細節(jié)，需要注意的是在書寫具體鐘點的時候正確運用時間表達法，句式力求變化新穎，短語表達要力求準(zhǔn)確，總體來說寫作難度不高，對細節(jié)的要求程度較高

寫作亮點：作文的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給了出來，所以需要書寫的部分就是關(guān)于餐桌禮儀的具體部分，用到的較為準(zhǔn)確的短語有：at different times 在不同的時間，every morning 每天早上，people over the age of thirteen 十三歲以上的人，prepare the breakfast for themselves 為他們自己準(zhǔn)備早餐，take your lunch bag 帶上午餐包，have your own lunch 吃自己的午飯，main dishes 主菜，drinking beer 喝啤酒。為了力求變化，也用到了條件狀語從句“If you are the last to have breakfast, you need to put the bread, milk and so on back in the fridge.”（如果你是最后一個吃早飯的，你需要把面包、牛奶等放回到冰箱里），總體來說用詞準(zhǔn)確，時間表達正確，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。