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【題目】隨著“創(chuàng)建全國文明城市”活動的開展, 我市《中學(xué)生英語報》正在開展校規(guī)校紀(jì)大討論。該報正在向各校學(xué)生征文。請你以“Rules of My School”為題, 寫一篇征文, 談?wù)勀銓πＲ?guī)的了解和認(rèn)識。
要點(diǎn)如下: 1. 你所知道的校規(guī)(列舉3條);
2. 你對這些校規(guī)的認(rèn)識;
3. 請你對改善校規(guī)提意見。
注意:
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名，詞數(shù)不少于80個。

Answer 1

【答案】Rules of My School
There are lots of rules in my school. For example, we must clean our classroom every morning. I think it's very necessary for us to keep it clean. And it's good for our health. We have to wear school uniform every day. I think the uniforms are ugly. In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes. We can't talk in the classroom. As far as I am concerned, keeping quiet is good for studying.
【解析】本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，題目為我學(xué)校的規(guī)則，寫作是應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)校的校規(guī)，以及你個人對待校規(guī)的看法，以及你對學(xué)校改善校規(guī)所提出的建議，同時在寫作時應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和先后順序的邏輯性。
提綱類作文。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。層次分明。不同要點(diǎn)英語使用的句式也不一樣。語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭介紹There are lots of rules in my school.被動語態(tài)的使用：we should be allowed to choose our own clothes. 可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。