Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

6月5日是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日，你校組織以 “Being a volunteer of going green”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如李明參加比賽，請(qǐng)你以李明的名義寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：

品質(zhì)	助人為樂(lè)，善良，有禮貌
愛(ài)好	旅游，閱讀，鍛煉
事跡	做過(guò)環(huán)保志愿者，為WWF籌集過(guò)資金
感悟	地球是我們唯一的家園 不應(yīng)亂扔垃圾，必須保護(hù)環(huán)境
措施	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

要求：1. 要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 使句子通順、連貫。

2. 正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。

3. 100詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Being a volunteer of going green

Hello， everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. ___________________________________________________________________________

If I can be a volunteer， __________________________________________________________

Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Being a volunteer of going green

Hello， everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.

I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time， I like traveling， reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.

Earth is our only home. We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly. I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together， we can make the world a better place.

If I can be a volunteer， I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫(xiě)作要求，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語(yǔ)意思，語(yǔ)言流暢。本文寫(xiě)作思路清晰，從五個(gè)方面分別竭力推薦自己。復(fù)合句的使用I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together， we can make the world a better place. 為文章增色不少，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)有邏輯性，更富有條理。