Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

依照下列問句，以My Hobbies為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

1. What hobbies did you use to have? Why did you like them?

2. What hobbies do you have now? Why do you like them?

3. What different hobbies do you have in different seasons?

My Hobbies

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Hobbies

Different people have different hobbies. I used to ride a bike and read story books. They could give us lots of knowledge. I keep cats and dogs. I thought pets were very friendly and lovely, but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet, because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship.

I have different hobbies in different seasons. In spring I like flying kites. In summer I go swimming. I often climb hills in the fall. I like making snowmen best in winter.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的愛好。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I used to ...，I thought ...，because music can...，I have ...，I like...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我過去的愛好以及原因，接下來介紹我現(xiàn)在的愛好以及理由，最后指出我不同的季節(jié)有不同的愛好。此處用了give sb sth, lots of, like doing sth, on the Internet, bring sb sth, go swimming 等這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。