Question

每個學校都有很多規(guī)章制度來規(guī)范中學生行為，請介紹你們的一些校規(guī)，并談談自己的看法。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
There are some rules in our school. First, we should wear uniforms and come to school early. Second, we should respect the teachers and listen to our teachers and take notes carefully in class. Third, we can't run in the classroom or the hallway. And we can't fight with everybody. Fourth, we have to eat lunch in school. The students are supposed to attend the school daily activities on time every day. Last, a note from the parents should be handed to the teacher if the students feel sick and can't go to school.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，介紹學校的規(guī)則。本題給出的材料較為簡略，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題，然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性，適當使用連接詞。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和從句，在敘述中使用連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: come to school來到學校，take notes記筆記，等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.