Question

【題目】假設(shè)下周你所在的班將開展為期一周的研學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一則通知告知全班同學(xué)。

陽光農(nóng)場之旅
活動(dòng)時(shí)間	一周
活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	陽光農(nóng)場
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	1.幫助清理農(nóng)場垃圾,搞好農(nóng)場衛(wèi)生;
	2.學(xué)習(xí)種菜、植樹;
	3.野餐,采摘水果(蘋果,梨……)
安全 tips	不要到河里游泳,不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)。

要求:1.字跡工整,書寫規(guī)范,包含全部要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱;

3.80詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

4.請(qǐng)將書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫在答題卡上相應(yīng)的位置。

參考詞匯: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(陽光農(nóng)場)

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

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That's all Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.

Wish you a happy journey!

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

寫作這篇寫作需要寫一則通知，主題是關(guān)于下周將開展為期一周的研學(xué)活動(dòng)，需要寫清楚活動(dòng)時(shí)間、活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和安全提示。需要注意的是短語的正確表達(dá)，適當(dāng)加入一些細(xì)節(jié)使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言連貫得體。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇寫作的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，于是需要注意正文內(nèi)容書寫的準(zhǔn)確性，首先應(yīng)說明寫這則通知的背景“Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm.”（下周我們班將去陽光農(nóng)場進(jìn)行游玩），要注意描述未來將要發(fā)生的事情需要使用一般將來時(shí)，具體的相關(guān)活動(dòng)敘述需要注意短語的正確表達(dá)，例如do some cleaning做些清掃工作，help clear away rubbish幫忙清除垃圾，plant trees植樹，grow vegetables種植蔬菜，have a picnic去野營，help the farmers pick fruits幫助農(nóng)民采摘水果，go swimming in the river在河里游泳，leave the class group離開班集體，文章中也使用了一些精彩的句式，如we mustn't…我們禁止…，Nobody is allowed to…沒有人被允許去做…等。最后結(jié)尾一段有祝福語Wish you a happy journey!祝你們度過一段美好的旅途！總體來說寫作內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。