Question

9．Write a letter in at least 60words according to the given situation on the topic"    ，we never say goodbye"．（根據(jù)情景提示，以"    ，我們永遠不會說再見"為題，寫一封不少于60個單詞的信件．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予．評分．）
情景：初中生涯已經(jīng)進入尾聲，學校里一定有你難忘的老師或同學．在此分別之際，你一定有很多與他們在一起時的美好回憶，而此時此刻的離別之情也溢于言表．請給這位老師或同學寫一封信，告訴他/她你此時的不舍之情．
Dearour English teacher
I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress． Now I am interested in English．I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．．
Yours×××

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up一年前，我不擅長英語，所以我想放棄它．be good at是一個固定短語，表示擅長于；so表示結果，give up是一個固定短語，意思是放棄．
高分句型二：With your help，I have made great progress．在你的幫助下，我取得了很大的進步．with one's help是一個固定短語，意思是在某人的幫助下；make great progress是一個固定短語，意思是取得巨大進步．

解答 Our English teacher，we never say goodbye
        I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher（老師的好品質(zhì)）．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．（高分句型一） You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress．（高分句型二） Now I am interested in English．（回憶老師對我學習英語的幫助及我的變化） I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．（對老師的祝福）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句．（4）適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．