Question

【題目】在我們成長的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道風(fēng)景。在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶! 某英語報社以＂A Story Between My Friend and Me＂為題開展征文活動，請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽。

要求：1. 故事必須原創(chuàng)；

2. 80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

參考要點：1. 分享故事(起因，經(jīng)過，結(jié)果……)；

2. 表達(dá)感受(幸福，感動，思考……)；

3. ……

A Story between My Friend and Me

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Answer 1

【答案】A Story between My Friend and Me

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happen, true friends will always be friends.

【解析】本書面表達(dá)要求以＂A Story Between My Friend and Me＂為題寫一篇文章，根據(jù)題目要求知道應(yīng)該寫一篇記敘文，同時必須完成相應(yīng)的要點內(nèi)容，作文的關(guān)鍵是回憶，因此它的基準(zhǔn)時態(tài)應(yīng)該以過去時態(tài)為主，即一、二要點，而第三點發(fā)表自己對朋友的看法或觀點，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。

【亮點說明】

本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中had a deep influence on, fell down, worried about, help me with my study, fall behind, in my opinion, No matter, and,so等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：賓語從句、時間狀語從句、No matter引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。