Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共10分）

你的朋友經(jīng)常和父母吵架，請你寫一封信給他建議：1. 如果是他遇到問題，應(yīng)該和父母談?wù)�，父母會樂意幫助�?/span> 2. 在家經(jīng)常幫忙做做家務(wù) 3. 告訴父母自己的喜好 4. 少玩電腦游戲

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some advice.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some advice.

First，if you have some difficulties in doing sth, you should talk to your parents, your parents will be happy to help you .Second, you should often help your parents with housework at home. Third, you should tell your parents your own preferences .Fourth , you should play less computer games .You should pay attention to your study. I think you can get on well with your parents.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求你寫一封信給你的朋友，給他一些建議。首先，審題時(shí)，應(yīng)是當(dāng)具體地進(jìn)行謀篇布局。然后，應(yīng)利用規(guī)范的語言，流暢的語句，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，對存在問題及采用辦法進(jìn)行詳細(xì)描述。最后簡單總結(jié)。另外，還應(yīng)盡可能地使用一些固定句型及短語，以提高文章的得分等級。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。還使用了一些固定句型及短語，為文章增色不少。如have some difficulties in doing sth等等。