Question

19．每個(gè)人都希望自己健康．那么，如何保持身體健康呢？請圍繞這個(gè)話題并結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況，寫一篇英語短文，簡要地談一談你的做法．要求70個(gè)詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is important for us to keep healthy．對我們來說保持健康很重要．
句中"it"為形式主語，代指"to keep healthy"，句型為"it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth 對某人來說做某事怎么樣"．
高分句型二：
Doing sports every day can help build us up．每天做運(yùn)動(dòng)可以增強(qiáng)我們的體質(zhì)．
句中"doing sports"為動(dòng)名詞做主語，句中還涉及到了短語"build sb up 增強(qiáng)某人的體質(zhì)"．

解答 Keeping healthy
It is important for us to keep healthy．【高分句型一】But some people don't know how to keep healthy，here is some helpful advice．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
First，you need to have healthy habits．Breakfast gives you energy for the morning．So don't go to school without it．Fruit and vegetables are good for your health．But fast food will make you fat and unhealthy．So eat the healthy food to keep healthy．
Second，playing sports can also help you keep fit．If we eat much food but do little sport，we will become fat and it's easy to get ill．Doing sports every day can help build us up．【高分句型二】
Last，happiness is important for your health．It is the best medicine．When you are ill，try to be happy and you will feel better．On the other hand，you may feel ill if you are always unhappy．So keep happy all the time．（保持健康的方法）
Please take care of your body and keep it being full of energy．And you can do well in study every day．（總結(jié)全文）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．