Question

【題目】請(qǐng)以Linda的身份給你的好朋友John寫(xiě)封信，告訴他如何緩解生活中的壓力，減少煩惱。

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右。提示詞必須全部用完。

2.語(yǔ)句連貫，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，觀點(diǎn)明確。

3.文章具有可讀性。

提示：

1.積極進(jìn)行體育鍛煉，保持健康的身體。

2.多和老師，朋友，家長(zhǎng)交流，說(shuō)出自己的煩惱。

3.多聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，多看書(shū)。

4.盡最大努力，勇敢面對(duì)自己的成績(jī)。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

If you want to be healthy and happy, you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I am writing to give you some advice and I hope you can follow it.

As a young student. First, doing more exercise is very important .Second, you can communicate your troubles with your teachers, friends, and parents. Besides, you should listen to more music and read more books. They can reduce your stress. What’s more, do your best to face up to your score. Last but not least, smiling as often as possible can help you stay happy and forget your trouble.

Hope my advice can be helpful to you .Good luck to you.

Yours

Linda

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求寫(xiě)一封書(shū)信，就如何緩解生活中的壓力，減少煩惱而給朋友一些建議。書(shū)信是一種大家都熟悉的體裁，而且內(nèi)容也貼近生活，學(xué)生們不會(huì)感到無(wú)話(huà)可說(shuō)。本文中涉及到的要點(diǎn)較多，所以在敘述的時(shí)候不僅要注意要點(diǎn)的全面，而且要注意語(yǔ)言的邏輯性，要恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍┻B接詞以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，條理清晰。此外，文章內(nèi)容是關(guān)于建議的，所以要注意一些建議的表達(dá)方法。