Question

11．人們常說(shuō)："沒(méi)有規(guī)矩，不成方圓"，合理的校規(guī)對(duì)于學(xué)生的健康成長(zhǎng)至關(guān)重要．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以"Our School Rules"為題寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，談?wù)勀銈兊男Ｒ?guī)．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：（1）你們學(xué)校有哪些校規(guī)？
（2）談?wù)勀銓?duì)這些校規(guī)的看法．
（3）請(qǐng)說(shuō)說(shuō)你的好建議．
（4）…
要求：（1）文中必須包括所給提示中1-3項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可展開(kāi)思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名和其它真實(shí)信息；
（3）不少于80詞．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求寫(xiě)出校規(guī)，提出看法和建議，寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要用第一人稱(chēng)，通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容包括：1．學(xué)校的校規(guī)有哪些．2．對(duì)這些校規(guī)的看法．3．提出你的建議．可展開(kāi)思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫通順，寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要只簡(jiǎn)單翻譯提示要點(diǎn)．

解答 Our School Rules
     There are many rules at our school．From Monday to Friday，we have to get to school before 7：00 in the morning．We must wear school uniforms，and I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart．We must listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish a lot of homework after school．We are not allowed to use mobile phones in class．I think the rules are very strict but useful，we should follow them．
     We have so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do．In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve different kinds of abilities．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．