Question

【題目】? 上周你班舉行了一次“告別陋習(xí)，走向文明”的??? 主題班會， 會上老師讓你們談?wù)勆磉呁瑢W(xué)的變化。 請按下列表中內(nèi)容寫一篇有關(guān)王明同學(xué)的文章。

過去的表現(xiàn)	現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)
經(jīng)常和同學(xué)打架	與同學(xué)相處融洽
花很多時間玩電腦游戲	積極參加各項活動
經(jīng)常吃垃圾食品	健康的生活習(xí)慣
在課上吃東西、睡覺	認(rèn)真聽講，按時完成作業(yè)
考試不及格	各門學(xué)科學(xué)得都很好

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注意：1 文章必須包含表中所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章意思連貫，語句通順。

2 字?jǐn)?shù)80-100字。

3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、地名、校名等。

Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term.?????????????????????

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Answer 1

【答案】Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend much time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class, he either ate or slept. He could never passed any exams.

But now, he has changed a lot. He can get on very well with his classmates. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities. He has healthy living habits. He always pays attention to listening to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. He does well in all the subjects. We all like him now.

【解析】這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是敘述王明在“告別陋習(xí)，走向文明”活動前后的表現(xiàn)。人稱為第三人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的句子需要注意主謂一致的關(guān)系。

需要用到的重點短語：fight with sb.,used to do sth., spend some time doing sth.，get on well with，take an active part in，pay attention to，do well in等。