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5．2015年宜春市申請創(chuàng)建江西省第五屆"文明城市"．作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該為創(chuàng)建文明城市做點什么？請你根據(jù)下列英文提示，用英語寫一篇英語短文．
提示：1．短文應(yīng)包含圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；
3．詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Build a Civilized Cityobey traffic rulesrespect teachers and other peoplebe ready to help othersprotect our environment…


Build a Civilized City

Yichun applied for"The Civilized City"in 2015．As a middle school student，what should we do for it？
First，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．For example，we shoudln't spit here and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．
In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Third，we must ①obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road ②when the traffic lights are red．
①obey rules 遵守規(guī)則
②when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
①Last but not the least，②it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．
①last but not the least 最后也是最重要的
②it is+adj+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Build a Civilized City

Yichun applied for"The Civilized City"in 2015．As a middle school student，what should we do for it？
First，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．（尊敬師長，明禮誠信）Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．（友善待人，樂于助人）Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．【高分句型一】（遵守交通，不闖紅燈）Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．【高分句型二】（保護(hù)環(huán)境）For example，we shoudln't spit here and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．（舉例）
   In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．