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3．為弘揚廣府文化，你校在上周六舉行了一次"GuangzhouCultureFestival"的活動．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹活動的情況并提出你對下一年文化節(jié)的建議．

注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；
（2）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分．
In order to increase students'knowledge about the traditional culture of Guangzhou，our school held a"Guangzhou Culture Festival"last Saturday…

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇材料作文，需要我們根據(jù)題目中所給的信息，用英語逐條表達(dá)出來．圍繞上周六舉行的"GuangzhouCultureFestival"的活動，要求寫出兩部分的內(nèi)容：一是要寫出三項活動內(nèi)容及相應(yīng)的活動情況動名稱，分別是粵劇歌唱比賽，圖片展和美食展；二是對下一年的文化節(jié)提出建議．人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，最后提建議時可以用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 參考范文：
  In order to increase students'knowledge about the traditional culture of guangzhou，our school held a"guangzhou culture festival"last saturday．
  Many kinds of activities were held in the festival，such as cantonese opera competition，picture show and foodshow．most of the students thought the cantonese opera competition was interesting and many of them enjoyed taking part in it．the music sounded good and the clothes were beautiful．the picture show presented the changes of guangzhou，which could make us learn about the history and culture of guangzhou．the food show was the most popular activities in the festival．different kinds of food were served and all of them were delicious．from the food show，we also could learn some basic skills of cooking，which helped us become a good helper in our family．
  I hope we can have some cantonese films in our culture festival next time．in addition，we can organize some visitors to travel around our city．

點評 此題為材料作文，要仔細(xì)審題，不要漏掉要點，抓住重點，把所給的信息條理清楚地表達(dá)出來．要求語句連貫，語法，時態(tài)，單詞等使用正確，書寫規(guī)范，字?jǐn)?shù)要合乎要求．