Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

從記事起，你就從電視上，書籍中看過不少的卡通故事，使你印象最深的卡通人物是誰，你為什么喜歡他，請寫下來與我們分享一下。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hi everyone，today I will talk about my favourite cartoon .His name is Doraemon（多拉A夢） ．He was born on September the third ，2112.But he got the modern world by magic machine .Now he is living in a boy's home and making friends with the boy called Daxiong .The boy always meets problems .But Doraemon will help him in time. Doraemon loves Dousha Cake very much .He hates the mouse very much .When he won't eat his favourite food ， he will became very angry .

I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一個話題作文。題目只給出了話題，但沒有給出任何要點。我們需要做的首先是根據(jù)話題，發(fā)揮想象，確定要寫的卡通人物。然后在寫這個卡通人物為什么給了你最深的印象。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、but，以及頻度副詞，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。