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13．假如你校英語報(bào)七月份將開展"校園之星"（Star of the Campus）評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)圖
中的信息，向校英語報(bào)寫一篇短文，介紹你心目中"校園之星"康康的情況．

提示詞：help…with 　 spare time  get along with do housework
要求：1．文章內(nèi)容符合題意，可參考所給提示詞；
      2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；
      3．詞數(shù)100左右（文章首段已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）．
Our school will select（挑選）"Star of the Campus（校園）"in July．I think Kangkang is the most suitable one．
At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our class．He also loves sports．He often plays football at weekends with his friends．What's more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class．
At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time．Besides，KangKang gets along well with his neighbors．This is why KangKang is so popular．
In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need．He sets a good example for us．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是介紹你心目中"校園之星"康康的情況．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；在學(xué)校：康康學(xué)習(xí)努力，成績好，愛足球，關(guān)心同學(xué)幫助同學(xué)
在家：幫助媽媽做家務(wù)，鄰里關(guān)系好

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
what's more 再者
care for 照顧
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
get along well with sb 與某人相處的好
【高分句型】
1．①What's more，he②cares for other students，so he always③helps them with their lessons after class．
①what's more 再者
②care for 照顧
③help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
2．This is why KangKang is so popular．
why引導(dǎo)的從句和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
3．①In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he②is always ready to help others③in need．
①in short 簡言之，做插入語．
②be ready to do sth 樂意做某事
③in need 在危急中，做后置定語，修飾others．

解答 Our school will select（挑選）"Star of the Campus（校園）"in July．I think Kangkang is the most suitable one．
At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our class．He also loves sports．He often plays football at weekends with his friends．What's more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class．【高分句型】（在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)）
At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time．Besides，KangKang gets along well with his neighbors．This is why KangKang is so popular．【高分句型】（在家的表現(xiàn)）
In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need．【高分句型】He sets a good example for us．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇看圖作文．看圖作文要注意一下幾點(diǎn)（1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)．  （2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖．所給提示詞可幫助理解畫面內(nèi)容，也是組成句子的必用材料．有時(shí)還會(huì)給出起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型，作適當(dāng)展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達(dá)出畫面的意思了． （3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫． （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用．（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等．