Question

進(jìn)來中國人都在說中國夢，假如你是一個(gè)無錫中學(xué)生，你叫Gao Fei, 來自湖北，目睹了無錫最近幾年的發(fā)展和變化，有喜有憂。于是你給政府有關(guān)部門發(fā)了一份e-mail，說說自己對(duì)未來的一些夢想，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 最近幾年無錫發(fā)展很快；比如，道路變寬了；城里可供人們休閑的場所也多了；這里的人們過著幸福的生活；

2. 但是還存在一些嚴(yán)重的問題：房價(jià)太高，許多人根本買不起房子；因?yàn)楣�業(yè)的發(fā)展，水和空氣被嚴(yán)重污染；人們很難呼吸到新鮮空氣。

我的夢想：……

注意1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 第3要點(diǎn)作2-3句話的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. E-mail的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4. 詞數(shù)：80個(gè)詞左右。

Dear Sir or Madam,

How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you. Recently，people in China have been talking about Chinese Dream. I also have my own dream and Iwould like to share it with others.

My name is Gao Fei. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here.

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Yours sincerely,

Gao Fei

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you. Recently，people in China have been talking about Chinese Dream. I also have my own dream and I like to share it with others.

My name is Gao Fei. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here.

Wuxi has developed quickly in the last few years. For example, the roads become wide. There are many places for people to relax. The people here are living a happy life.

     But there are still some problems. The prices of the houses are too high. Many people can’t afford to buy them at all. Water and air are badly polluted. It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.

     My dream is that people in Wuxi can enjoy clearer blue sky , more beautifule Taihu lake and that every family can own a nice comfortable home in the future .

Yours sincerely,

Gao Fei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹夢想的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫出滿意的文章來。