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【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友Bob來信談到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)江城的情況。請你用英語寫一封回信�；匦彭毎�括以下內(nèi)容：

1．位于長江邊、風景優(yōu)美、適合居��； 2.經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速；

3．新建了不少工廠、住房、道路等； 4.水、空氣污染；

5．交通擁擠； 6.對江城發(fā)展的看法。

注意：

詞數(shù)80左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟economy n.

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng...

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear_Bob，

It's_very_kind_of_you_to_write_to_me_and_let_me_know_about_your_beautiful_city._Now_I'd_like_to_tell_you_something_about_my_hometown_Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as air and water pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Yours，

Li_Hua

【解析】

這是一篇書信作文。內(nèi)容是：假如你是李華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友Bob來信談到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)江城的情況。請你用英語寫一封回信。本文主要所用時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細閱讀內(nèi)容提示，根據(jù)提示列好提綱，根據(jù)提綱寫作文。內(nèi)容要包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當發(fā)揮。不要寫得太少，字數(shù)在80詞以上。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。（一）根據(jù)要點列提綱：這座城市座落在長江岸邊。這是一個美麗的居住地。在過去的十年中，它的經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速。新建了工廠、房屋和道路。更多的學校和醫(yī)院可供人們使用。但仍存在一些問題，如空氣污染、水污染和高峰時段交通擁擠等。我認為，江城應該科學地發(fā)展經(jīng)濟。我也認為應該控制人口的增長，這樣我們以后會有一個更好的家鄉(xiāng)。（二）連詞成句，連句成篇，注意使用連詞；（三）寫完以后再閱讀一遍，檢查是否有語法、單詞拼寫等錯誤，或不合適的地方。