【題目】短文改錯(cuò)。

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加或一個(gè)單詞的刪除，其他錯(cuò)誤為單詞的修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧，并在其下面寫(xiě)出增加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(\劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處。

Last night，when we were sleeping，my husband and I hear a noise，so we got to up and turned on the light. I thought it might is a cat out of the window. However，my husband says it must be a thief. Because we were both afraid the noise，we called the police for help. A few minutes later，some policeman came. As they searched for the noise maker，the noise became loud and louder. Finally，they finded that the noise maker was a bird. The bird hurt not only its leg but also its wings. We gave it the one aid，and then took it to the Animal Protection Institute(動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì))．So my husband and I could have a well sleep.

【答案】Last night，when we were sleeping，my husband and I hear, heard a noise，so we got to (\)up and turned on the light. I thought it might is, be a cat out of the window. However，my husband says, said it must be a thief. Because we were both afraid ∧,of the noise，we called the police for help. A few minutes later，some policeman, policemen came. As they searched for the noise maker，the noise became loud, louder and louder. Finally，they finded, found that the noise maker was a bird. The bird hurt not only its leg but also its wings. We gave it the one, first aid，and then took it to the Animal Protection Institute(動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì))．So my husband and I could have a well, good sleep.

【解析】

第一處錯(cuò)誤，句意: 昨天晚上當(dāng)我們睡覺(jué)的時(shí)候,我的丈夫聽(tīng)到了噪音.根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Last night可知是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故用hear的過(guò)去式heard,故把hear改為heard.

第二處錯(cuò)誤，句意：所以我們起床并打開(kāi)了等。“起床”固定短語(yǔ)got up，需要把to 刪掉。

第三處錯(cuò)誤，句意：我認(rèn)為它可能是一只窗戶(hù)外面的貓。might是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，表示可能性推測(cè)，后跟動(dòng)詞原形，故is改為be.

第四處錯(cuò)誤，句意：然而，我的丈夫說(shuō)它肯定是個(gè)小偷。這個(gè)故事發(fā)生在昨天晚上，動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去式，故says改為said.

第五處錯(cuò)誤，句意：因?yàn)槲覀儍蓚�(gè)都害怕噪音，我們就叫了警察幫助�！昂ε隆惫潭ǘ陶Z(yǔ)be afraid of，故需在afraid后加of.

第六處錯(cuò)誤，句意：一些警察來(lái)了。根據(jù)句子中的some可知這里要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把policeman改為policemen.

第七處錯(cuò)誤，句意：當(dāng)警察搜尋噪音制造者時(shí)，噪音聲音變得越來(lái)越大了。根據(jù)and后的louder可知這里用到比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)的形式，表示越來(lái)越…,故把loud改為louder.

第八處錯(cuò)誤，句意：最后，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了噪音制造者是一只小鳥(niǎo)。此故事發(fā)生在過(guò)去，故用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式，find的過(guò)去式是found，故把finded改為found.

第九處錯(cuò)誤，句意：我們給它進(jìn)行了急救。根據(jù)句子中的the可知，這里用序數(shù)詞,故把one改為first。

第十出錯(cuò)誤，句意：所以我和丈夫睡了一個(gè)好覺(jué)。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，這里需要形容詞修飾名詞sleep, 用到短語(yǔ)have a good sleep睡個(gè)好覺(jué)。故well 改為good.

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