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3．我國是一個發(fā)展中國家，我們應該勤儉節(jié)約，使中國成為一個節(jié)約型的社會．我們中學生應該從身邊的點滴做起，節(jié)約能源． 你是如何做的？請你就這一個話題寫一篇小短文，要求語句通順，語法正確，意思完整，80詞左右．
What will you do to save energy？I think we should do followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I'm not using it．Fifth，it is important to save water and money【高分句型】．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees【高分句型】．I'll try my best to save energy，I hope I can do something for our country．．

Answer 1

分析 重點短語：
1．take a bus or a taxi乘坐公交車或出租車
2．turn off the lights 關(guān)閉電燈
3．try one's best to save energy盡力節(jié)約能源
高分句型：
【高分句型一】it is important to save water and money節(jié)約水和錢是很重要的．（It's+形容詞+to do 做某事是…）
【高分句型二】we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees．我們最好不要砍伐樹木，我們必須保護樹木．（had better not do 最好不要做某事）

解答 What will you do to save energy？I think we should do followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I'm not using it．Fifth，it is important to save water and money【高分句型】．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees【高分句型】．I'll try my best to save energy，I hope I can do something for our country．

點評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，平時多注意常考的作文形式，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．