Question

19．根據中文提示，寫一篇介紹Mary的短文．
要求：1、語言通順，表達準確
2、80左右單詞
要點提示：
1．May是你最好的朋友，你倆從7歲時就認識了．她住的離你家很近．
2．她個子，圓臉，小鼻子，長發(fā)，很友好．
3．她很聰明，樂于助人，經常幫助同學做作業(yè)，幫老師收發(fā)（hand in/out）作業(yè)本．大家都喜歡她．
4．她長大后想成為一名醫(yī)生，幫助那些病人．
My Best Friend
May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
 She often help her classmates to finish their homework．她經常幫助她的同學完成家庭作業(yè)．這個句子中含有一個結構"help sb．to do sth．"意思是"幫助某人做某事"
高分句型二：
She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．長大的時候，她想當醫(yī)生，她想幫助病人．這個句子含有一個結構"be going to do sth．"意思是"將要做某事"，grow up意思是"長大"是固定短語．

解答 May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．She lives near me．/Her house is close to mine．
（介紹長相）She is a tall girl．She has a round face with a small nose．She has long hair．She always smiles to people．She is always friendly to us．
She is clever and helpful．【高分句型一】She often help her classmates to finish their homework．She helps her teachers to hand in and out the exercise books．Everyone likes her very much．
【高分句型二】She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．（當醫(yī)生的原因）

點評 首先要仔細審題，確定要使用的時態(tài)，以及人稱，根據要點提示，用地道的語言表述出來，注意要點不能有漏落，這篇文章比較簡單，可以采用簡單句來寫，還要盡量使用一些高級結構，比如時間狀語從句，不定式，"help sb．to do sth．"，"be going to do sth．"等等，這樣可以提高得分的檔次．