Question

13．在過(guò)去的日子里，我們?cè)��?jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣…照片，或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對(duì)往事的回憶．某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站向你發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，請(qǐng)你按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事．
要求：
1．故事必須原創(chuàng)；
2.80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)．
參考要點(diǎn)：
1．描述你的照片（時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物…）；
2．分享你的故事（起因，經(jīng)過(guò)，結(jié)果…）；
3．談?wù)勀愕母惺埽ǜ袆?dòng)，懷念，影響…）．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up．我輸了比賽我感到如此的傷心以至于我想要放棄．
so…that從句：如此…以至于…
【高分句型二】
But I will never forget what my father told me但是我將不會(huì)忘記我爸爸告訴我的．
what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 This is a photo that is very special to me．In the photo，I was 10 while my dad looked younger．Look，we are playing ping pong happily．（描述你的照片）
I used to be a ping pong player．My dad trained me so hard，though he was tired after a day's work．Once，I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up．【高分句型一】My father said nothing，sitting quietly with me．The next morning，I found a piece of paper．It said，"Never give up，dear．I am proud of you!"（分享你的故事）
Now，I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study．But I will never forget what my father told me．【高分句型二】He is proud of me．How lucky I am to be his daughter!（感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．