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【題目】在黔南州建州六十周年到來之際，請你以志愿者Li Hua的身份向中外友人宣傳我們的家鄉(xiāng)——黔南，并倡導大家做文明市民，讓家鄉(xiāng)變得更加美麗。
要點提示：1）介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)
①美麗的風景；②宜人的氣候；③傳統(tǒng)的工藝；④悠久的茶文化。
2）倡導：①誠實友善；②樂于助人；③保護環(huán)境，低碳生活。
要求：1）必須用上以上信息，可適當發(fā)揮；
2）要求句子連貫，語意通順，書寫規(guī)范；
3）詞數(shù)不少于80詞，文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
參考詞匯：traditional arts， citizen（市民）， low-carbon（低碳）
Hello! My name is Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. Welcome to my hometown –Qiannan. It lies in the south of Guizhou Province.
Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Hello! My name is Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. Welcome to my hometown – Qiannan. It lies in the south of Guizhou Province. There are many beautiful places， such as Xiaoqikong， Doupeng Hill and so on. It's popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. What's more， it's famous for tea， such as Duyun Maojian， Guiding Yunwu，etc.

As a citizen in Qiannan， it's our duty to make our hometown better. I think we should be honest and kind. We are ready to help others. It's necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life.

In my opinion， if everyone tries his best to do something for our hometown， it will become more and more beautiful.

Thank you!

【解析】本題是一篇給提綱作文，根據提示信息，短文要從“介紹”和“倡導”兩個方面進行寫作。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱單數(shù)形式。并恰當利用所提供的詞匯traditional arts， citizen（市民）， low-carbon（低碳），包含了提示的所有要點：第一段介紹黔南；第二段倡導人們努力爭作文明市民，把家鄉(xiāng)變得更加美麗；第三段提出自己的看法，對未來充滿希望。短文層次清楚，文中利用not only…but also…， with； such as；be famous for等等；恰當利用句型it's one's duty to do sth; be ready to do sth; 不定式作主語的句型；try one's best to do sth一些常用的簡單句型，通俗易懂，易于理解，為文章增加色彩。