Question

【題目】 童年是人生最美好的時(shí)光。小時(shí)候你一定接收了許多心愛(ài)的禮物，你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了？它是誰(shuí)送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶？請(qǐng)你以“My favorite gift”為題寫(xiě)一篇80至100詞的英語(yǔ)短文。

要求：行文連貫、條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

My favorite gift

My favorite gift from childhood is __________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My favorite gift

My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.

I like it very much because it is so cute. It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.

The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don't want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I'm getting older!

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛(ài)禮物。主要從：你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了？它是誰(shuí)送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很特別，因?yàn)槲規(guī)缀趺刻於荚谕�，直到十歲。

句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。

【高分句型二】

I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時(shí)候，沒(méi)有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)去睡覺(jué)。

句子when I was six years old是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。