Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

踐行文明禮儀從我做起。作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該不斷提升文明素養(yǎng)，做文明禮儀的倡導(dǎo)者。請(qǐng)以“Be a Person with Good Manners”為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1. 敘述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、經(jīng)過以及你的看法)；

2. 就如何成為一名有文明素養(yǎng)的學(xué)生提出自己的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；

2. 詞數(shù)：80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Be a Person with Good Manners

It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Be a Person with Good Manners

It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.

Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.

In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be trained to be persons with good manners.

【解析】

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in our daily life，enjoy dinner in a restaurant，try to do，refuse to do，listen to me，laugh at sb.，in fact，be proud of，in my opinion，be polite to others等。同時(shí)特殊句式It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.和In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion,/ Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。