Question

15．現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)而努力奮斗，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面圖示談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)是怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么做？

要求：
1．短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China．      ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Doctors are the people ①who can②help patience get out of sickness and pain，they help others to be able to obtain joyfully醫(yī)生是幫助病人解除病痛的人，他們幫助別人保持快樂(lè)．
①who作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句．修飾前面的people，who做主語(yǔ)．
②help sb do sth幫助某人做某事．
【高分句型二】
These new technologies make our life much easier and better新科技讓我們的生活簡(jiǎn)便的多，好的多．
make …+adj讓…怎樣

解答 Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China．Doctors are the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain，they help others to be able to obtain joyfully．【高分句型一】（醫(yī)生）Policemen protect the community，making it a better place．they help people live without worries，in a safe and peaceful place．（警察）We can't live without rice，so we should thank the farmers，they work hard to grow the rice for us．（農(nóng)民）21st century is the century of technology．Nowadays，technology is everywhere around us．These new technologies make our life much easier and better．【高分句型二】The scientists invent them．（科學(xué)家）
As a student，I think we should be polite to our teachers and classmates and follow the action rules to keep shool yard clean．Work hard to be a useful man，then help to make our country more beautiful．（作為學(xué)生我的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1）文章扣題：描述有的放矢，突出主題．
　　2）思維活躍：發(fā)散思維空間，學(xué)生從不同的、全新的角度看待分析一個(gè)事物或現(xiàn)象．
　　3）內(nèi)容健康充實(shí)：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)樂(lè)觀向上，以積極的態(tài)度進(jìn)行表達(dá)．這個(gè)在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中就應(yīng)注意培養(yǎng)成一種穩(wěn)定的思維方式，以防止在遇到稍微有一點(diǎn)新意的題時(shí)亂了陣腳，不知道說(shuō)什么．