Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文。請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出改加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I am delighting to learn that you are going to visit to me during the week-long vacation. Both my parent will also be very happy to see you, but I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

I know you are fond of swimming. We can go swimming in the river, that lies not far away from my home. I think this will be very pleasant to swim in such hot summer days. In every gig room of my home there is air-conditioner. You can watch TV, play CDs or read books very comfortable at home. About two miles away from my home stood a mountain which is really worth toured. When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful view of the whole village.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Xiao Ming,

I am to learn that you are going to visittome during the week-long vacation. Both my will also be very happy to see you, I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

I know you are fond of swimming. We can go swimming in the river, lies not far away

from my home. I think will be very pleasant to swim in such hot summer days. In every gig

room of my home there is air-conditioner. You can watch TV, play CDs or read books very at home. About two miles away from my home a mountain which is really worth. When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful view of the whole village.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【語篇解讀】本文是一封信。在信中，李華向小明介紹了在即將到來的一周假期，他們?cè)谒�家可以做的事情�?/span>

【1】delighting改為delighted�？疾樾稳菰~。作表語說明主語I的情況，表示“感到高興的”，故用delighted。

【2】去掉visit 后的to�？疾閯�(dòng)詞。動(dòng)詞visit是及物動(dòng)詞，可直接加賓語，故去掉to。

【3】parent改為parents。考查名詞。parent由both修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式，將parent改為parents。

【4】but改為and/so�？疾檫B詞。前后兩句在意思上是順承關(guān)系或因果關(guān)系，故用and或so。

【5】that改為which�？疾槎ㄕZ從句。非限制性定語從句中，指代先行詞the river在從句中作主語，故用which，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

【6】think后的this改為it�？疾榇�詞。該主謂結(jié)構(gòu)真正的主語是to swim in such hot summer days，故主語的位置應(yīng)用形式主語it。

【7】there is后加an�？疾楣谠~。air-conditioner是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，表泛指其前應(yīng)加不定冠詞，且第一個(gè)音素是元音音素，故用an。

【8】comfortable改為comfortably�？疾楦痹~。修飾動(dòng)詞read應(yīng)用副詞，故用comfortably。

【9】stood改為stands�？疾橹髦^一致。本文敘述一般情況，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；該句主語是單數(shù)名詞a mountain，故用stands。

【10】toured改為touring�？疾榉侵^語動(dòng)詞。be worth doing是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，表“值得……”，故用touring。