Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是學生會主席李華，代表學生會向你校積極參加第十四屆廣東省運動會（the 14th Games of Guangdong Province）的志愿者同學寫一封公開的感謝信，要點包括：

1. 表達感謝；

2. 簡述志愿者的付出（時間、精力等）；

3. 贊揚志愿者精神。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)在100左右。 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear boys and girls,

Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear boys and girls,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to all of you for working as volunteers in the 14th Games of Guangdong Province on behalf of the Students’ Union.

As we all know, you have tried your best to get the chances to be the volunteers and spent almost all of your spare time serving the athletes in summer vacation. You could not get paid and could hardly enjoy the wonderful games. Instead, you have just worked hard with no regrets to pay in silence. All of you have the spirit of volunteers and keep doing all that you could to help others regardless of rewards. For you, to be volunteers is not just your duties but your responsibilities.

I must thank you again for your generous help. It is with your efforts and contributions that the games can be held successfully.

Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：本文主要對參加第十四屆廣東省運動會的學生的感謝信，根據(jù)題目中的內(nèi)容要點：1.表達感謝；2.簡述志愿者的付出（時間、精力等）；3.贊揚志愿者精神。由此可確定使用一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱，適當使用復合句、非謂語動詞等較復雜語法來組織這篇文章。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語on behalf of代表；in silence沉默；keep doing一直在做某事；work hard with和……一起努力工作；As we all know, you have tried your best to get the chances to be the volunteers and spent almost all of your spare time serving the athletes in summer vacation這個句子中as引導非限制性定語從句，和不定式作chances的定語以及to get不定式作目的狀語；All of you have the spirit of volunteers and keep doing all that you could to help others regardless of rewards這個句子運用到doing短語作賓語和that引導的定語從句；It is with your efforts and contributions that the games can be held successfully這個句子中使用的強調(diào)句型等等，充分說明該文章能夠緊扣主題，要點全面，堪稱佳作。