Question

In an English competition, you are required to write an article according to the picture below. Look at the picture carefully and write down how you understand it.

注意：

1、描述圖片主要內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愕睦斫饧翱捶ǎ?/p>

2、詞數(shù)不少于120個；

3、文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

As we can see from the picture，two people，father and son，are talking to each other．The

boy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big Chinese character “fu”, meaning “father” , is shouting to his son．

Such a situation seems fairly common in our society. When talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions. Fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently．Therefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers．They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ expectations.

I hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)提示可知這是畫圖式作文。那我們可以采取圖畫式作文的典型“三段式”寫法----描寫圖畫、分析圖畫和個人總結(jié)。在題目的要求中也不難察覺到，第一點要求“描述圖片主要內(nèi)容”就應(yīng)是開頭第一段寫到的“提出話題”，開頭段描寫圖畫，就圖寫圖，無需發(fā)揮任何的主觀意見和言論。作者用一系列的伴隨狀語如standing on the ground，slightly scared等生動簡潔地表達了圖片內(nèi)容。第二點要求“談?wù)勀愕睦斫饧翱捶ā保�也就是第二段“分析圖畫”要寫的內(nèi)容。最后寫一段個人總結(jié)來結(jié)束全文。 注意在文章的表達中不要透露個人相關(guān)信息。

【亮點說明】

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，是一篇典型的圖畫式作文。首先用兩個句子描寫圖畫內(nèi)容，在兩個句子中插入很多狀語，同位語等，如standing on the ground，slightly scared, seated high on a big Chinese character “fu”，既展示了作者深厚的文字功底，又以達到來不遺漏圖片信息的目的。在第二段中作者表達自己看法，使用了一系列短語如share their own ideas，look up to，live up to fathers’ expectations還有一些高級詞匯如fairly，rather than，讓人眼前一亮。雖然過渡詞不多，但是句子之間聯(lián)系緊密，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。在最后一段作者用一句話表明自己的觀點：I hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders. 其中動名詞的用法為文章增色不少。