【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

When young, I looked forward to my birthday all year. My friends and family made me feel like the most special person in world. The night before my birthday , my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping. They hang balloons on my walls. When I woke up, I was always surprising!

Although my birthday was on a school day, I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates. While I was having my party at our house, my parents were made up lots of fun game to play. When I got old, my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting.

The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday, meaning I had to wait another whole year before it came again.

【答案】

【1】in后面加the

【2】careful--carefully

【3】hang--hung

【4】surprising--surprised

【5】Although--If

【6】were去掉；

【7】game--games

【8】old--older

【9】I --me

【10】before--after

【解析】

【1】in后面加the 考查冠詞。In the world 在世界上；

【2】careful--carefully 考查副詞。句意：在我生日之前的晚上，我的父母當(dāng)我睡覺時(shí)小心地搬到我的房間。

【3】hang—hung 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知在敘述過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)；

【4】surprising—surprised 考查形容詞。句意：當(dāng)我本來時(shí)，我很吃驚。Surprised 用來修飾人；

【5】Although--If 考查連詞。句意：如果生日在上學(xué)時(shí)過，我會(huì)與同學(xué)和老師分享。

【6】were去掉； 考查動(dòng)詞的語態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)我舉行聚會(huì)時(shí)，我的父母編了很多游戲玩。Make up 編造；

【7】game--games 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：當(dāng)我舉行聚會(huì)時(shí)，我的父母編了很多游戲玩。Lots of 后面加可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【8】old--older 考查形容詞的比較級(jí)。句意：當(dāng)我長大時(shí)，我的父母會(huì)讓我的朋友和我通宵看電影和聊天。

【9】I --me 考查代詞。Let sb do 讓某人做某事，用賓格形式；

【10】before—after 考查連詞。句意：生日過后最悲傷的日子，意味著我要等待下個(gè)生日的來臨。

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