Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章。

One day, a poor boy who was selling goods door to door to pay for school was hungry. So he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. A young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal, he asked for a drink of water. However, she brought him a large glass of milk．

Years later the young woman got ill, so her family sent her to hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to study her rare disease．Dr Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the consultation. When he went in to see her, He recognized her at once. He was determined to do his best to save her life.

After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr Kelly looked at the bill and wrote something on the side, and then it was sent to her room. She was afraid to open it because she was positive that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off．Finally she looked, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention．She read these words: “Paid in full with a glass of milk.”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 用約30 個單詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 用約120 個單詞就“幫助別人就是幫助自己”這一話題發(fā)表自己的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)文中主人公是如何詮釋這一道理的；

(2)舉例說明這個道理；

(3)如果以后碰到需要幫助的人，你將如何做。

[寫作要求]

1. 闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時,不能直接引用原文語句;

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dr. Kelly did his utmost to save a young woman’s life and paid the expensive bill only because the young woman once offered him a glass of milk when he was hungry and thirsty.

After reading the passage, I was deeply lost in thought. If the young woman hadn’t given that poor boy a glass of milk, she might not have been saved and been able to pay the bill. As a result, when we happen to meet someone who needs help, we should give him or her a hand. Helping others will benefit ourselves.

I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Senior One. Li Ping, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was always explaining them to him patiently. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, surprisingly, I found my English improved too.

Helping others is also helping ourselves. In my future life, as long as I came across someone in trouble, I will make every effort to help him or her out. Only if everyone can act like this will the world become more an more beautiful.

【解析】這篇范文概括部分簡潔明了，短短33個詞概括了故事內(nèi)容。表達(dá)觀點部分能緊扣“幫助別人就是幫助自己”這一話題來寫，所用例子來源于日常生活，并且使用主題句加上支撐句表達(dá)。此外，文中使用了較好的詞匯和句型，如“be lost in thought；came across ；make every effort to do sth.；might have done；Helping others will benefit ourselves（動名詞作主語）；Only if everyone can act like this will the world become more an more beautiful（倒裝句）…”。