Question

書面表達(滿分25分))
為了豐富同學們的課余生活，緬懷革命先烈，你校決定舉辦＂紅五月歌詠比賽＂，請你以學生會的名義寫一份書面通知．有關內(nèi)容如下：
1.以班級為單位;
2.以革命歌曲為主;
3.報名時間為4月10前.
4.舉辦時間為4月28日下午于學校禮堂．
注意：書面通知應寫成一篇連貫的短文，可以適當增加情節(jié)，詞數(shù)為120左右，注意通知的格式。
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear students,
With the purpose of enriching our school life and recalling revolutionaries who devoted all their life to the cause of China's liberation, we'll have a singing competition for Red May on April 28th in the hall of our school .
All the classes should have a full preparation for it, and the songs will be mainly about the praises of the revolutionary. Besides ,we'll give rewards to the best singers and the classes .What’s more, some of our parents will be invited to the activity. Why not try your best and give them a big surprise?
We hope that all the classes take an active part in this activity and not to forget to sign up before April 10th.
Thank you!
Students’` Union
March 29th,2013

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。