Question

書面表達（滿分15分）
請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇介紹魯迅的100字左右的文章。
1. 魯迅生于浙江省紹興，受過傳統(tǒng)的中國教育。 1902年去日本學習日語和醫(yī)學。1906年輟學，專攻寫作。
2. 魯迅是著名的短篇小說家。在西方，他寫的故事非常出名，已被翻譯成至少12種語言。
3. 在魯迅的一生中，他致力于保持自己獨立的作家地位（maintain one’s status）。

Answer 1

Lu Xun is a very famous short-story writer in China. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, he received a traditional education. In 1902, he went to Japan where he studied Japanese language and then medicine. Four years later, he dropped out of the school to devote himself entirely to writing.
At the same time, Lu Xun is chiefly known for his stories in the western countries, which have been translated into more than a dozen languages. In brief, in his lifetime Lu Xun managed to maintain his status as an independent writer and established his special fame in the history of China.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文，內(nèi)容根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇介紹魯迅的100字左右的文章，考生有話可說。要點都已經(jīng)給了出來。只是需要考生運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還需要自己組織語言，要使用一些好的句式如he went to Japan where he studied Japanese language and then medicine.和：Lu Xun is chiefly known for his stories in the western countries, which have been translated into more than a dozen languages. 可以使用一些諺語來提升文章的檔次。還要用合適的連接詞把各要點連接成完整的文章，
點評：提綱類作文要注意要點要全面，不能省略或者遺漏，發(fā)表觀點要貼近文章的中心思想不能有過多的發(fā)散。也要言之有理。