Question

16．假定你是李華，是我校一名高二的學(xué)生，暑假你們班同學(xué)將赴山東省博物館參觀學(xué)習(xí)，想邀請外教Andy一起前往．請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．集合的時間，地點；
2．交通方式；
3．展覽內(nèi)容：中國剪紙，書畫，文物（cultural relic）等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Andy，
I'm very delighted to write a letter toinviteyou tovisit Shandong Museum for an exhibition．We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00 am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
The exhibition includes a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China and some famous books and paintings．Besides，there is a show about Chinese culturalrelics．During the visit，I will show you aroundSpring City--Jinanand this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
Would you please have a look atthe exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，是我校一名高二的學(xué)生，暑假你們班同學(xué)將赴山東省博物館參觀學(xué)習(xí)，想邀請外教Andy一起前往．請給他寫封郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：集合的時間，地點；交通方式；展覽內(nèi)容：中國剪紙，書畫，文物（cultural relic）等．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：plan to計劃做某事；at the gate of在…門口； Besides另外；enjoy yourself 過得愉快；look forward to盼望；
We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
During the visit，I will show you around Spring City--Jinan and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Andy，
      I'm very delighted to write a letter to invite you to visit  Shandong Museum for an exhibition．We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00 am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
     The exhibition  includes a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China and some famous books and paintings．Besides，there is a show about Chinese cultural relics．During the visit，I will show you around Spring City--Jinan and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
      Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．