Question

書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分25分）

假如你是高二學(xué)生名叫王海。最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)班上部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試都會出現(xiàn)焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信給某英文報編輯反映這個問題。信的內(nèi)容包括：1 焦慮癥狀 2建議（至少三點）

注意：1根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐字翻譯

2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫

3詞數(shù)100左右 ，開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)

參考詞匯：頭暈 dizzy 食欲不振：lose one’s appetite

Dear editor,

I’m Wang Hai, a student of Grade 2 in senior high school. I ‘m writing to tell you some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all those symptoms have terrible effects on our exam and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exam, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是關(guān)于考試焦慮癥的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說，有很強(qiáng)的可行性。首先應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚，在發(fā)表個人建議的時候，可以適當(dāng)使用高級的句式和高級的詞匯來給文章增色。在自己的個人建議中可以加入諺語，讓文章更上一層樓。

【亮點說明】范文使用了很多詞組：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相處， in my opinion在我看來, stay up熬夜，還使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語， there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語從句，還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

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