Question

【題目】英語寫作,請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合具體事例用英語寫一篇短文。

When we grow up, we often get a lot of love, support and help from our teachers, friends as well as our parents. However, we seldom express our gratitude to them. Being grateful to others is what we shouldn’t forget.

注意： ①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語； ②除詩歌外，文體不限； ③文中不得透露個人姓名及班級名稱； ④詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】

As middle school students, not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities. I think expressing our gratitude to people who helped us is one of the good qualities we must possess.

Talking of gratitude , my classmate’s experience never escapes me. Two years ago, my classmate, Wang Wei ran into difficulty because his father was diagnosed with lung cancer. His father’s illness added to his family’s trouble, so Wang Wei was in danger of dropping out of school. After learning about his bad situation, our head teacher gave him timely help by allowing him to continue his schooling without any tuition. With the help of the teachers and classmates Wang Wei finished school. Just before this important exam he wrote us a letter expressing his sincere thanks for what we had done. We were deeply moved by his letter. It was then that we realized our kindness meant so much.

Wang Wei ‘s story reminds us to be grateful to people who helped and supported us. In fact ,being grateful to all surrounding us can make us optimistic about our life.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容給家長、父母和朋友寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)自己的感激之情。

寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。文中所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，第一段寫了我們要有感激之情；第二段講了一個具體例子講述感恩的重要性；最后一段講感恩的重要性。短文中作者按照題目的要求條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。而且作者在寫作時，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的詞匯和句式，增強了文章的連貫性。如定語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞、強調(diào)句型的用法。acquire knowledge，expressing our gratitude，in danger of，With the help of，reminds等詞匯。