Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華。下面四幅圖記錄了周日你在人民公園踏青的經(jīng)歷。請據(jù)圖用英語寫一篇日記。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

Sunday, May4 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】Sunday, May 4 Fine

It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I couldn’t stop taking photos. As I wandered along the path, enjoying the beautiful view, I notices something unpleasant. Two schoolgirls jumped over the fence to pick flowers and climb the tree. Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior had done great damage to the beauty of the park. Without hesitation, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite embarrassed, the two girls came out immediately. Then they took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and everything looked nicer in my eyes.

【解析】這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1. 認真讀圖，可知四幅圖記錄了周日你在人民公園踏青的經(jīng)歷，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)，講述上周日的事情用過去時為基本時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的提示。在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。

【亮點說明】

The moment I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight.我一進入公園，就看到了各種美麗的花和綠樹。句中The moment引導(dǎo)狀語從句I entered the park表示“一…就…”。

Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior had done great damage to the beauty of the park.顯然，他們沒有意識到他們的行為對公園的美麗造成了極大的損害。句子里that引導(dǎo)賓語從句。