Question

假設(shè)你的筆友Tony因上期高三期末數(shù)學考試未及格而倍受打擊，情緒低落。請你 (王華)寫一封信給他，鼓勵他重拾自信，實現(xiàn)夢想。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；
2、不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。
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Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.
As senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success. There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.
I hope all above can help you a lot. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.
Yours，
Wang Hua

試題分析：這是一封書信，但是只給了一個話題，沒有具體的內(nèi)容，屬于開放性作文，給出了一個話題：讓你寫一封信給Tony，鼓勵他重拾自信，實現(xiàn)夢想。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：as well as 不但…而且…，As for 至于，turn our dream into reality把夢想變成現(xiàn)實， but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.這句話用了主語從句和表語從句， There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.這句話用了固定句型， We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. 這句話用了倒裝句， I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.這句話用了so that引導的結(jié)果狀語從句。