Question

假定你是李華，在報(bào)上看到北京華夏大學(xué)將于2014年2月16日舉辦為期一周的“中國(guó)語(yǔ)言文化冬令營(yíng)”活動(dòng)。你的美國(guó)朋友Mike計(jì)劃來(lái)中國(guó)旅游并了解中國(guó)文化，請(qǐng)寫郵件介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)并建議他參加。

2014中國(guó)語(yǔ)言文化冬令營(yíng)
主要課程	日常會(huì)話   漢字書(shū)寫
主要活動(dòng)	京劇，中國(guó)民樂(lè)，中國(guó)繪畫(huà)欣賞，烹飪，游覽故宮，天壇，長(zhǎng)城
活動(dòng)時(shí)間	2014年2月16日—22日

注意：
信件要包括以上內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
詞數(shù)100左右，頭尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
參考：  2014中國(guó)語(yǔ)言文化冬令營(yíng) 
2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp
天壇   the Temple of Heaven

Answer 1

Dear Mike
You mentioned in your last letter that you hoped to come to China to learn about Chinese culture. I’d like to introduce a camp to you, which is called “2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp”. It is organized by Beijing Huaxia University from Feb. 16^th to 22^nd, 2014. In the camp they will teach not only some simple everyday Chinese but also how to write Chinese characters. They will also introduce Beijing Opera, Chinese folk music as well as Chinese Painting. The most important of all is that you will have a chance to learn to try Chinese cooking. Sight-seeing tours include the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and the Great Wall.
You may sign up for this winter camp if you are interested. If you have any questions, please let me know.
Best wishes.
Li Hua

試題分析：題目要求寫一封電子郵件，向美國(guó)朋友Mike介紹一個(gè)冬令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，并建議他參加此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。信件的要點(diǎn)以表格的形式列出，一目了然，比較容易構(gòu)思。注意信的格式，使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，不能出現(xiàn)拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，盡量使用定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，來(lái)增加亮點(diǎn)。必須用上參考詞匯，注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文分為兩段，第一段主要介紹冬令營(yíng)，第二段提出建議。范文使用了一些重要的句型和語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：固定句型I’d like to introduce a camp to you；賓語(yǔ)從句how to write Chinese characters；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which is called “2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp”；固定搭配not only some simple everyday Chinese but also how to write Chinese characters；表語(yǔ)從句that you will have a chance to learn to try Chinese cooking；能夠用上定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句，使得作文增色不少；
范文還使用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定搭配：as well as；have a chance to learn...；learn to try Chinese cooking等，范文做到了簡(jiǎn)潔明了、語(yǔ)意連貫。