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【題目】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the frier(皮衣制作工) it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eight silver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. His sisters cried loudly.

Aaron took along two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlatch stood as patiently as ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.

The sun was shining when Aaron left. Suddenly the weather changed, and after a while it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aaron’s boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer on the road. Zlateh bleated (哀鳴) as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh(雪橇) along the way. But he could see nothing.

Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came near it, he realized that it was a large haystack (大干草堆) covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay was food for Zlateh.

Zlateh, sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaron ate his bread, but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Zlateh and realized that he would not be starved to death. Goat’s milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the wind

quieted down.

Paragraph 1: .

On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells.

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Paragraph 2:

The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family.

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Answer 1

【答案】On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells. He got out of the haystack, and found that it was not far from the road. Aaron shouted loudly to the peasant who drove the sleigh for help. Finally, they were saved. Aaron had made up his mind in the haystack that he would never part with Zlateh. Therefore, the peasant pointed out the way to the village. Aaron made his way home together with Zlateh, his loyal friend.

The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family. The whole family, including Aaron’s father, rushed out to meet them in great excitement. Aaron told them in tears how he had found the haystack and how Zlateh had fed him with her milk in the past few days. Aaron’s sisters kissed and hugged Zlateh and Aaron’s father gave the goat a special treat of chopped carrots. Nobody ever again thought of selling Zlateh, who had been an import family member to them.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。

這是一篇記敘文。通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章講述了父親Reuven為了度過艱難冬季，決定賣掉家里最老的山羊—Zlateh，長子Aaron負(fù)責(zé)將Zlateh送到屠戶那里換錢，在途中，他們?cè)庥隽孙L(fēng)雪天氣，Aaron尋得了大堆干草堆，又餓又冷的情況之下， Zlateh的羊奶給與了Aaron溫飽。歷經(jīng)三天的風(fēng)雪天氣終于停了下來，在一位過路農(nóng)民的幫助之下，他和羊一起回家與家人團(tuán)聚。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells. ( 第四天早上，Aaron聽到了雪橇的鈴聲。)所以應(yīng)該寫Aaron從干草堆里出來后發(fā)生的事情，由首句的“Aaron heard the ringing if sleigh bells”，可知，要描述的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是Aaron和羊如何獲得雪橇主人的救助，比如大聲呼喊；同時(shí)，由于前文提供的線索“Goat's milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly.( 羊奶是甜的。Zlateh頻繁地吃干草，她的身體發(fā)出動(dòng)物般的溫暖，Aaron緊緊地?fù)肀е�她�?/span>)可知，本段還應(yīng)該描寫Aaron在與羊建立了深刻感情之后的不忍分離等；第二段開頭是The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family. ( Aaron 和Zlateh在回家路上的消息，使全家人都非常高興。) 本段應(yīng)該描寫家人的反應(yīng)，情節(jié)和細(xì)節(jié)上要回應(yīng)上文，尤其突出描寫父親的反應(yīng)和變化，比如父親改變的對(duì)羊的態(tài)度，不再賣掉或給與羊獎(jiǎng)賞等，文末要進(jìn)行主題升華。

還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右，按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。