Question

【題目】假如你是李華。你打算邀請在你校學(xué)習(xí)的英國交換生Mike周末外出游玩一天。請你根據(jù)以下要點給Mike發(fā)一封郵件：

1.發(fā)出邀請；

2.日程安排及理由；

3.詢問對方意見。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mike

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I am writing to invite you to go out for a day on weekends. Here is a brief schedule.

Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set off a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us. Of course, a bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.

If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us. Do you have any suggestions for this outing?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，邀請英國交換生Mike周末外出游玩一天。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 發(fā)出邀請

2. 日程安排及理由；詢問對方意見。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

go out；on weekends；in the center of；set out；Aiming to；along with sb.；of course；ahead of；require to do

第三步：連詞成句

1. Here is a brief schedule.

2. Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set out a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm.

3. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue.

4. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us.

5. A bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.

6. If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改