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3．假設(shè)你是安陽(yáng)市第三十六中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信表示感興趣．
說明優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷 （曾在學(xué)校廣播站當(dāng)記者）并希望得到回復(fù)
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old boy，presently attending Anyang No.36 Senior High School．Having read your ad．for a few part-time English reporters in the newspaper，I feel I'm fit for the job，so I'm writing to apply for it．
As a student，I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fiel ds．Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．So I think I'm the very person you are looking for．I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position．
I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你是安陽(yáng)市第三十六中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，你要給給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信表示感興趣．因此，你需要說明你的知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷 （曾在學(xué)校廣播站當(dāng)記者）并希望得到回復(fù)．
文章基本要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，但在寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
1．文章是要給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信表示自己對(duì)兼職記者這份工作感興趣，所以主體時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
2．要點(diǎn)要齊全．但不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列．可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文銜接的自然流暢．
3．在介紹自己時(shí)，要以一定的邏輯順序進(jìn)行敘述，細(xì)節(jié)把控要到位，否則會(huì)顯得內(nèi)容不夠豐滿．
4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【范文亮點(diǎn)】
優(yōu)秀詞匯和短語(yǔ)：consideration考慮；apply for申請(qǐng)；I'd appreciate it if…如果…我將不勝感激；look forward to期待…
優(yōu)秀句式和行文脈絡(luò)：
1．高分句型一："Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing．"使用了"Not only…but also…不但…而且…"．
2．高分句型二："I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．"，使用了句型：I'd appreciate it if…如果…我將不勝感激．
3．文章采用了"Not only…but also…、In addition、Above all"等連詞，使行文更加流暢．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old boy，presently attending Anyang No.36 Senior High School．Having read your ad．for a few part-time English reporters in the newspaper，I feel I'm fit for the job，so I'm writing to apply for it．
As a student，I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fiel ds．Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing（高分句型一）．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．So I think I'm the very person you are looking for．I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position．
I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．I'm looking forward to your reply（高分句型二）．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．