Question

【題目】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Meaningful Activity”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。 介紹今年國慶期間，你們班在大興機場參加志愿活動的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：值機柜臺the check-in counter，行李車luggage cart

A Meaningful Activity

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Answer 1

【答案】This National Holiday, I, together with my classmates, took part in a voluntary activity, which turned out to be an impressive experience.

One week ahead of the National Holiday, our monitor told us that we were going to volunteer in Beijing Daxing International Airport during the holiday, which aroused our great interest. Though the work sounded challenging, we just couldn’t wait to start.

Before the activity, we gathered at the airport and met the lady who was in charge of our voluntary activity. She gave us a brief introduction of the airport and explained what we were going to do next. Listening attentively, we wrote down some important details in case we might forget them during the work.

Then came the exciting moment. Because of the National Holiday, there were constant flow of visitors and passengers. Some of us gave clear guidance for passengers to find the correct check-in counters as soon as possible, while some of us collected the luggage carts to put them in order. Although tired, we gained a great sense of achievement.

As time passed by, the activity came to an end. Before leaving, we took a picture with the staff, feeling proud of what we had done and that we gave a special birthday gift to our country.

【解析】

本文為看圖寫作。你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Meaningful Activity”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。 介紹今年國慶期間，你們班在大興機場參加志愿活動的全過程。

看圖作文就是要求根據(jù)圖畫(或表格)的內(nèi)容展開合理的想像，寫出文章的一種寫作方式。看圖作文應(yīng)做到以下幾點： (1)認真讀圖，弄清大意：讀圖時要充分理解圖畫所表達的內(nèi)容，弄清圖中的人物在干什么，弄清圖畫背景與人物之間的聯(lián)系，弄清事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。(2) 理出要點，擬定提綱： (3) 緊扣要點，擴寫成文。 (4) 通讀短文，修正錯誤。寫好文章之后應(yīng)通讀全文進行檢查。在檢查時，應(yīng)著重看短文是否扣住圖畫的內(nèi)容，要點是否有遺漏。同時，還要注意有無語法錯誤，如時態(tài)、人稱等，是否符合文體特點、格式等等。

讀圖之后，要根據(jù)圖畫表達的主要內(nèi)容，理出表達的要點。列出要點時要注意分清主次，看圖作文時描述圖畫內(nèi)容是不可取的，應(yīng)充分展開想像使圖畫活起來。理出要點之后，就可以根據(jù)要點擬定提綱，即把整個圖畫中要表達的內(nèi)容先用一句話寫下來。在列出要點后，依據(jù)已經(jīng)寫出來的話語擴寫成一篇短文。擴寫時，可運用想象適度發(fā)揮，緊扣圖畫的內(nèi)容，進行適當敘述，連貫通順即可。