Question

1．假設你是某校高三學生李華．最近你校的英語校報舉辦了"感恩父母"的征文比賽．請你結合自己的實際，按照下列提示用英語寫一篇短文參加比賽．
1．多年來父母對你的關愛（至少兩個方面）；
2．最近一段時間你的表現(xiàn)；
3．你報答父母的打算（至少兩個）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
I'm always grateful to my parents．_____________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇列出寫作要點的提綱類作文．內容包括：列舉至少兩反面這么多年父母的關愛；列舉最近的表現(xiàn)；如何報答父母．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱．
高級詞匯和高分句型：
keep sb company 陪伴
overcome difficulties 克服困難
appreciate 感激
be admitted into 被…錄取
高分句型：
（一）They not only①gave me life，but also brought me up with selfless love and support，feeling so proud of my every tiny bit of progress．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…；
feeling so proud…現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語；
（二）．②Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate so much．
Furthermore 而且，表遞進；
which 引導非限制性定語從句，指父母給我足夠的個人空間這件事．

解答 I  am always grateful to my parents．①They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with selfless love and support，feeling so proud of my every tiny bit of progress，They always share my happiness and sorrow．Once，I still remember，I was seriously  ill and they were so worried and kept me company the whole night．Now I'm in Senior 3，and luckily for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition and often encourage me to overcome difficulties．②Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate so much．So I have been coping with both my studies and my life well recently．
  What I should do now is to keep on studying hard in order to be admitted into a famous university．When I become independent economically in the future，I will help my parent live a better life．

點評 本題為提綱類作文，難度不是太大．要求考生全面審題，抓住中心，列出要點，選擇自己有把握熟悉的短語句型來表達，并能使用適當?shù)倪B接詞銜接文章．