Question

16．假設你是李華，昨天收到筆友Tom的電子郵件，得知他打算來中國學習漢語，想咨詢你如何學好漢語．請你給他回復一封郵件．要點如下：
你收到他的電子郵件的心情；
對他學習漢語的建議；
你隨時提供幫助；
注意：1．詞數100左右；
      2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
      3．開頭與結尾已為你寫好．
Dear Tom，
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     Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
                                                      Yours，
                                                      Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．然后把文字組合在一起，那樣你才能更好的學會各種固定用法和句型結構．
高分句型二：
Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．看電視和聽收音機是練習你聽力的最后辦法．
句型一 so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns 該句是一個由so that引導的目的狀語從句
句型二Watching TV and listening to the radio are good…該句的主語是由動名詞短語充當的，由于此處用and 連接了二個并列主語，因此謂語使用了復數，通常情況下，動名詞作主語謂語使用單數

解答 Dear Tom，
   I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．Chinese is very useful and interesting，and many foreigners are learning it now．
  Chinese is different from English．First，you'd better remember as many Chinese characters as possible．Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．（高分句型一）Next is communication．Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．（高分句型二）It's also important to do some reading and writing．（提出方法）
   If you have any questions，please tell me．I'm willing to give you help at any time．
  Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
 Yours，
 Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為一封電子郵件，該類作文寫作時應注意用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將要點中的內容表達清楚即可，切忌過度啰嗦，抓不住重點的套話．