Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jackson最近在考慮是否要出國(guó)留學(xué)，他來(lái)信尋求你的意見。請(qǐng)你就此用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 建議他出國(guó)留學(xué)；

2. 列舉幾點(diǎn)出國(guó)留學(xué)的好處（不少于三點(diǎn)）。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jackson,

I’ve heard that you are hesitant about whether to go abroad for further study. Indeed, people who study abroad open themselves up to experiences that those who stay at home will never have. So I hope you can choose to study abroad. Here are the reasons.

The most obvious advantage of overseas university study is the use of a different language. There is no better opportunity to improve a second language in a foreign country. Secondly, you can make friends from all over the world. Finally, living and studying abroad offers a person a new and different viewpoint of the world and his own country.

I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本次書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)如下：①寫信的目的：建議他出國(guó)留學(xué)；②出國(guó)留學(xué)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；③希望自己的建議有價(jià)值。

第二步：根據(jù)關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)，確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：study abroad（出國(guó)留學(xué)），advantage（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）等。

第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使之自然流暢，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面。