分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:1. 認真審題,找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準確定位人稱、時態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一:
Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework,so she offered to help me with it
一旦她發(fā)現(xiàn)我想中途放棄消費年齡掙扎我的數(shù)學(xué)作業(yè)后,她主動提出幫助我.
高分句型二:
From my perspective,since peer pressure is very important,we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us,and keep away from those who do not.
從我的角度來看,因為同齡人的壓力是非常重要的,我們應(yīng)該接近那些對我們有積極影響的人,遠離那些不積極的人.
解答 The passage explains what peer pressure is.This pressure has positive and negative on our lives.Teenagers give in to peer pressure quite easily,so they should be taught to make good choice.
This reminds me of my classmate,Landa,who is the top student in our class.She has a positive influence on me.Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework,so she offered to help me with it(高分句型一).Unfortunately,she couldn't solve the maths problem straight away.But she kept trying,and worked on the problem for several hours,I was very moved.I was very moved.Since then,her firm determination to overcome difficulties has inspired me whenever I has been in a tricky situation.
From my perspective,since peer pressure is very important,we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us,and keep away from those who do not(高分句型二).
點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題,并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮.不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力,而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求.
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