16.假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)成員,學(xué)生會(huì)將于暑期邀請(qǐng)某知名書法家舉辦漢字書法培訓(xùn)班,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知,要點(diǎn)如下:
1.培訓(xùn)班的目的;
2.學(xué)習(xí)書法的好處;
3.上課時(shí)間、地點(diǎn):7月21日~8月10日,每天下午3:00-5:00;201室;
4.歡迎大家踴躍參加.
提示:書法calligraphy  書法家calligrapher
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫.
NoticeGood news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly,clearlyand beautifully,a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term.(高分句型一)A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice.
The class will be of great benefit to us.Firstly,it can help us master some necessarycalligraphy skills.Secondly,writingChinese calligraphy can also provide light physicalexercise and calm the mind,which can have a positive effect on our health.(高分句型二)In addition,it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life.
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3:00pm.to 5:00pm.every afternoon,fromJuly 21 to August 10.(高分句型三)
Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much youenjoy it!.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)成員,學(xué)生會(huì)將于暑期邀請(qǐng)某知名書法家舉辦漢字書法培訓(xùn)班,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:培訓(xùn)班的目的;學(xué)習(xí)書法的好處;上課時(shí)間、地點(diǎn):7月21日~8月10日,每天下午3:00-5:00;201室;歡迎大家踴躍參加.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be of great benefit to對(duì)…有益;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;In addition另外;have a positive effect on 對(duì)…有積極影響;
To help the students write Chinese characters correctly,clearly and beautifully,a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term.(高分句型一)
Secondly,writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind,which can have a positive effect on our health.(高分句型二)
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3:00pm.to 5:00pm.every afternoon,from July 21 to August 10.(高分句型三)

解答 Notice
      Good news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly,clearly and beautifully,a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term.(高分句型一)A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice.
      The class will be of great benefit to us.Firstly,it can help us master some necessary calligraphy skills.Secondly,writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind,which can have a positive effect on our health.(高分句型二)In addition,it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life.
      The class will be given in Room 201 from 3:00pm.to 5:00pm.every afternoon,from July 21 to August 10.(高分句型三)
      Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much you enjoy it!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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