【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I was a sweet and loving girl during I was very young. Unfortunate, things changed. It all started when I was given smart phone in the eighth grade by a good friend. I became fond of watching movies, chat online and playing addictive games. Naturally, I couldn't make progresses in my study any more. What's worse, I spent fewer time in communicating with my parents. Thus, all of them were worried about what had been happened and turned to my head teacher for help. With their help, I realized what serious the things were and decided to change myself. Now I am grateful to them and became a good girl.

【答案】

【解析】

本文是記敘文。作者曾經(jīng)有一段時(shí)間，因?yàn)榘V迷智能手機(jī)，而陷入麻煩之中。在父母和老師的幫助下，認(rèn)識(shí)到事情的嚴(yán)重性，改變了自己，又成了一個(gè)好女孩。

第一處：考查連詞。句意：我很年輕的時(shí)候，是一個(gè)甜美可愛(ài)的女孩。I was very young是句子，應(yīng)使用連詞引導(dǎo)，介詞只能連接短語(yǔ)。故during改為when。

第二處：考查副詞。句意：不幸的是，事情發(fā)生了變化。此處修飾整個(gè)句子，應(yīng)使用副詞。故Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。

第三處：考查冠詞。句意：這一切都始于我八年級(jí)的時(shí)候，一個(gè)好朋友給了我一部智能手機(jī)。此處泛指“一部智能手機(jī)”，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞，由smart是輔音因素開(kāi)頭的詞，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞a。故在smart phone前加a。

第四處：考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：我開(kāi)始喜歡看電影，上網(wǎng)聊天，玩上癮的游戲。此處與and playing addictive games是并列成分，做be fond of的賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)使用動(dòng)名詞。故chat改為chatting。

第五處：考查不可數(shù)名詞。句意：自然，我在學(xué)習(xí)上不能再取得進(jìn)步了。progress是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故progresses改為progress。

第六處：考查形容詞的比較級(jí)。句意：更糟糕的是，我花更少的時(shí)間與父母溝通了。few修飾可數(shù)名詞，而time為不可數(shù)名詞，此處應(yīng)使用little的比較級(jí)less來(lái)修飾。故fewer改為 less。

第七處：考查不定代詞。句意：因此，他們兩個(gè)都很擔(dān)心會(huì)發(fā)生什么事，于是向我的班主任尋求幫助。all指代三者或三者以上，both指代兩個(gè)人或物；此處指my parents，是兩個(gè)人，應(yīng)使用代詞both。故all改為both。

第八處：考查動(dòng)詞。句意：因此，他們兩個(gè)都很擔(dān)心會(huì)發(fā)生什么事，于是就向我的班主任尋求幫助。happen 是不及物動(dòng)詞，沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，應(yīng)去掉been。故去掉happened前的been。

第九處：考查副詞。句意：在他們的幫助下，我意識(shí)到事情的嚴(yán)重性，決定改變自己。what為代詞不能修飾形容詞serious，應(yīng)使用副詞how“多么”。故what改為how。

第十處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：現(xiàn)在我很感激他們，我已成了一個(gè)淑女了。由Now I am grateful to them可知，此處描述的目前的情況，應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，此處與am是并列成分，也應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故became改為become。

【短文改錯(cuò)參考翻譯】

我很年輕的時(shí)候，是一個(gè)甜美可愛(ài)的女孩。不幸的是,事情發(fā)生了變化。這一切都始于我八年級(jí)的時(shí)候，一個(gè)好朋友給了我一部智能手機(jī)。我開(kāi)始喜歡看電影，上網(wǎng)聊天，玩上癮的游戲。更糟糕的是，我花更少的時(shí)間與父母溝通了。因此，他們兩個(gè)都很擔(dān)心會(huì)發(fā)生什么事，于是就向我的班主任尋求幫助。在他們的幫助下，我意識(shí)到事情的嚴(yán)重性，決定改變自己�，F(xiàn)在我很感激他們，我已成了一個(gè)淑女了。

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